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(Resume Objective section)
To obtain a permanent position where I could be afforded the opportunity for professional growth while utilizing my diversified background

To obtain a full-time position in ___________ that requires excellent _______ and _______ skills

The last two blanks could have things like:

computer and technical
organizational and communication
proofreading and editing
customer service and communication
marketing and sales

etc
etc
etc

sounds good to me...leave it like it is.

Start over. That objective is not only a clich茅, it is so vague it is totally meaningless. When I read it, all I see is "I want a job." I don't even see what kind of job. Be more specific without getting verbose.

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