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HELP with COLLEGE ESSAY tips Please????

Please submit a personal statement of 150 to 500 words (maximum) that
highlights your leadership achievements or significant service contributions
to your high school or community. This personal statement is required.
Since you are applying online, you must submit your statement with this
application in the space provided.



HOW CAN I MAKE THIS INTO SORT OF A STORY INSTEAD OF JUST LISTING THINGS THAT IVE DONE.

HOW CAN I BRING ONE EVENT AND INCORPORATE THAT INTO A LIFE LESSON OR WHATEVER

please help me, tips, suggestions. Sorry for the Caps

Im thinkin about writing about a time when i volunteered at Ronald Mcdonald house charities but dno what to say in the essay

thank u so much. That was short and concise and very helpful. I posted this question in 3 differennt categories and the one category that i would thought would be least helpful turned out to be the greatest help.

start with what motivated you to volunteer, then explain the experience, a memorable moment maybe, and then close with how it made you feel to do it. Maybe a specific childs smile or laugh that you will never forget. Something sentimental like that.

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