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What tagline do you like for my company? It is a fitness corporation?

I have two choices:
-Upgrade your fitness- Upscale your life
- You're the most important person in your life-Live Like It

Upgrade your fitness- Upscale your life

Sounds more 'upscale'.

I would prefer "upgrade your fitness, upgrade your life"

you're the most important person in your life- live like it

because every one is important
and the other one kind of sent a mixed message upgrade
sounds like you are trying to do something to your computer
upscale that you wont to gain weigth

I like Upgrade your Fitness Upscale Your Life

But in reality you are wanting to say

"Take Your Fitness to A Whole New Level - You're Worth It!"

"The Most Important Fitness Upgrade Is For You!"

#2

I just don't like the innuendo of the scale going up. I do like the Upgrade your fitness part though, just not the upscale part.

neither one...too wordy

I like the idea of number 1, but not your word choice.

How about the following:

Enhance your fitness. Enhance your life.
Elevate your fitness. Elevate your life.

Or a combination of both?

My problem with #2 is that a lot of people *don't* like to consider themselves the "most important." To many people, this may sound a bit selfish (although I do like the message you're trying to convey).

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