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I've reworked the slogan. What do you think of it now?


I already asked about the previous slogan:

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

And got some very helpful advice. So now the rewrite is:

UNLIMIT YOUR IMAGINATION

Does the use of "unlimit" as a verb appear to annoying, or is it something you can live with?

it's good but you can make a better one

beyond imagination

No limit for you to imagine

Imagine and you'll get it

Imagine and achieve

Just your imagination

Unlimiteded thinking

No limit for your ideas

Unlimit your limit (this is good because slogans always have a rhythm so people remember them)

unlimited technology for your imagination to shine

no ulimit doesn't appear annoying but i like my slogans more lol ;)
tell me what you think

hope i helped

It's good. It's not annoying at all. It's familiar, but not quite right, so it's arresting. At the same time, the meaning is quite clear.

Seems a bit clumsy IMHO.

How about:
UNLIMITED IMAGINATION or IMAGINATION UNLIMITED.

It's annoying, but then again so is spelling words like "Cream" as "Kreme" - and the English teacher that lives inside my head still eats the damn Krispy Kreme donuts and loves 'em..

So YES, it's not "proper" english, but I think IT IS VERY CATCHY, MEMORABLE, AND WILL WORK GREAT!!!

Still don't like it. Why does the limit word have to be used.

I really think you can imply no limit without using the word. The word imagination implicitly has no limit.

I still like my idea the best.

"Produce the Imaginable"

I find the incorrect grammar in this situation to be annoying. Sorry. Keep at it. You'll get it right.

Things don't always have to be totally perfect grammactically. One of my majors back in college was Journalism (the other was marketing) and I studied a lot of English - but I occasionally will use a short fragment sentence to add marketing punch.

So not every grammar irregularity will bother me - but this one does.

In this case 1st of you are charging your target person that his/her imaginations were limited and now you are advising him/her to unlimit that. Don't you think it is annoying attitude?

It is always suggested to use "Positive Addressing" to your taget, never the "Negitive Addressing".

Better you use "Imaginations Unlimited" or "You can imaginh this too"

In my opinion, being in advertising, i wouldn't use that slogan.

Unleash your imagination. Look for synonyms for "unleash." you want the customer to feel like they are getting something positive and it is a win win situation and they are already creative, but you are their to help them go further.

is weddyjoy.com a good domain name ? what do you think

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