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In the office:
On the one hand bankers and brokers have to deal with a lot of money at work. They go for high risk and balance on the edge between very high profits or very high losses. In combination with long working hours, this means a lot of stress. To handle all this you have to have a preference for taking risks and looking for the adrenalin rush.

Spare time:
Bankers have little spare time, but usually a lot of money to spend. As mentioned above, many of them have generally a high affinity to risks. That is why they tend to live in extremes. Employees of financial institutions want to experience as much as possible in very little time, whatever the charge is, are looking for the adrenalin rush and put all eggs in one basket in their leisure activities, too. Additionally they want to have a contrast to their sedentary jobs. This is why many of them practice extreme sports like base jumping or car racing, sports with high accident rates. But they have not time to practice it.

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Feedback on the statements . . . well, I disagree with pretty much every single "statement" in both categories above. Sounds like you made it up as you went along.